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Etiquette and Redemption VI The End by deathshadow1991 Etiquette and Redemption VI The End by deathshadow1991
Octavia: um, Vinyl, our place is the other way...
Vinyl: oh...yeah... I knew that

Finally at the ending, it has been a fun 2 weeks with this project but I'm glad to be able to put the pen down for a bit and breath, gonna catch up on some games and some other random stuff before moving to the next project so hopefully you all enjoy this and keep an eye out for the next big thing

Ponies by Lauren Faust and Hasbro
Art by me, Starlight Quill

Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
Page 4: [link]
Page 5: [link]
Page 6: Open your eyes, look up in surprise and see ^^
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:iconjbrenham:
jbrenham Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
Beautiful.
This would make a nice theme song for comics like this: [link]
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:icondeloreandudetommy:
DeloreandudeTommy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, this is seriously adorable.
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:iconprinnylover101:
prinnylover101 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
will you still continue this?
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
if i come back to this it would be a rewrite then a continuation but with all my other projects i just don't know right now
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:iconallanpike:
Allanpike Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice, very sweet.
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:iconstemofathorn:
stemofathorn Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
I'm going through an OctaScratch phase right now. Good art! D'AAWWWW
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
glad i could give you a d'awww moment ^^
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:iconstemofathorn:
stemofathorn Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
You gave me more than a D'awwww moment. You gave me a SupaD'Awwww moment!
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
i think that is an achievement somewhere on my list XD
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:icongingerfrost:
gingerfrost Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Agasp. I have no comment.
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:iconwolfking164:
Wolfking164 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
I was going to say "dawww" but its Vinyl Scratch. Even when its a cute ending, you gotta know she won't like the daww comments.

Nice job. ;)
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012
Thanks, and it's ok to daww, just don't let her hear it XD
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:iconwolfking164:
Wolfking164 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
She would hear it still. xD
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:iconmasterghostunlimited:
MasterghostUnlimited Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that is so nice loved the ending
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
Thanks, this ended up being my favorite page to make to be honest ^^
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:iconmasterghostunlimited:
MasterghostUnlimited Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yw and nice
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:iconeaglespartan888:
EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awww, great comic! Great job!
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
Thanks ^^
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:iconeaglespartan888:
EagleSpartan888 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome! :)
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:icondeadeye-0x:
DeadEye-0X Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2012
scaramoosh, scarmoosh can you do the fandango?
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:iconmrmrhi:
mrmrhi Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
im just a poor boy *Pooor booy* I need no sympathy...
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:iconastrotoadp5:
astrotoadp5 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012
Because I'm easy come, easy go, little high, little low.
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:iconmrmrhi:
mrmrhi Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
Any where the wiiind blooows doesn't really maaatter to meeeeee....toooo meeeeeeee....
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:iconastrotoadp5:
astrotoadp5 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2012
Mama, just killed a man. Put a gun against his head, pulled the trigger, now he's dead.
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:iconmrmrhi:
mrmrhi Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
Mama, life had just begun...
but now I've gone and thrown it all away...
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:iconastrotoadp5:
astrotoadp5 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2012
Mama, ooh.... Didn't mean to make you cry... If I'm not back again this time tomorrow, carry on, carry on, like nothing really matters.
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:iconmrmrhi:
mrmrhi Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
Too late, my time has come...
Sends shivers down my spine, Body's aching all the time...
Goodbye, everybody, I've got to go...
Got to leave you all behind and face the truth.
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:iconastrotoadp5:
astrotoadp5 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012
Mama, ooh... I don't want to die, I sometimes wish I'd never been born at all.
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:iconarthuurs:
Arthuurs Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
scracther hahah
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:iconomny87:
Omny87 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Overall, this wasn't a bad comic. The only problems I could see is that some of the color choices throughout the comic make it hard to read. I can barely make out the word "END" at the bottom, for example.

If you do want to have text over a similar-colored background, I'd suggest adding a drop shadow or outline to the text that's either brighter or darker than the background color, depending.
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Well I had to add the text using Microsoft Paint so I was limited in my options, as for the text color I was experimenting with some text bubble styles and it didn't work out so i'll fix it next time
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:iconomny87:
Omny87 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
If your technology is lacking, I'd get something like GIMP. It's a good digital art program you can get for free online- basically the poor man's Photoshop.
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
I use SAI currently, I might look into gimp for adding text but I'm sticking to what little I know currently.
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:iconmst3kforever:
Mst3kforever Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Fantastic! Very well drawn, very well written, very well executed.
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
thanks ^^, I was afraid that with the deadline of the competition it was gonna be a bit sloppy, there are a few scenes that had to be cut out for time issues that I might make some deleted scene pages later.
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:iconlikestofish:
likestofish Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
The scarf disappeared
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
The second person to notice this Easter egg, congratulations, can you find the rest of the intentional mistakes ^^
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:icontritos:
tritos Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
in the seond panel down, on the right, i thought it was octy's arm and i was like what happened, then i realized it was her scarf and i was like "oh his art is still spot on". nice comic
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
yeah, it was late on that I put on the scarf and didn't choose the color very well, should have made it something else but didn't have time to correct it with the competition
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:iconwhiteless:
whiteless Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
cool comic... the only thing I want to point out is that the text is a bit hard to read. Make it stand out more so I wont have to force my eyes to see what it says.
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
well I was experimenting with a new style other than the standard text bubble and while it looks nice it is hard to read at times, I apologize for this and will try to find a better yet still unique way of getting the text in future comics.
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:iconwhiteless:
whiteless Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just keep in mind the basic rule, that it must be easy to read.
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
well im posting a fix for lyra's text, switched it with a basic black but I just came up with my next idea so I'm done working in E&R for now
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:iconwhiteless:
whiteless Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
its all about trial and error... you will find a style you both like and works
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
thanks, hopefully the next project will hit the spot a bit better
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:iconwhiteless:
whiteless Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
good luck :D
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:iconthegrimside:
TheGrimside Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Great ending. Top work for this comic. I loved every moment of it!
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Glad to hear it, I'm planning on more in the new year so look forward to it ^^
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:iconflyffsky:
FlyFFSky Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
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I still don't approve of VinylXOctavia. No offence, I did really like this comic. Why does Vinyl have to be higher in fandom!
Dam the person who shipped Vinyl with her in the first place...Gah!
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Well to be fair you could say the same about any background character that the fandom ran off with, like Derpy or Caramel. I personally like the idea of the party girl with the high class cellist but I'm also a fan of the other background characters. It's just a case of to each their own
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