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Etiquette and Redemption IV by deathshadow1991 Etiquette and Redemption IV by deathshadow1991
After getting through this one i don't think the last two pages are going to be a problem, after page extensions, file corruptions and having to walk through rain to submit this I feel that I have achieved something with this page XD. Anyway, 4 out of 6 done and still keeping up with the update every other day, wish me luck and see you all again on wensday.

Edit: switched Lyra's text so everyone can read it

Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
Page 4: *zelda "get" music*
Page 5: [link]
Page 6: [link]
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:icontheunrealchrichan:
TheUnrealChrichan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You should really draw the pony who is currently speaking with their mouth open. Now it looks like they're using telepathy...
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deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
well a combination of time constraints and other stuff led to a few problems, plus this being my first comic with actual dialogue the poses where more for the emotion and I was trying to make them quickly. I will keep your advice in mind in the future though.
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vsbloom Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
panel 9: "person" dont u mean pony?
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nintenstar Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
Loving this! Don't stop!
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
don't plan to, not till i win that tablet from equestria daily ^^
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RoyGBiv-MLP Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
It's "too" not "to" in the final two panels, FYI. Other than that, looking good!
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deathbyrobotunicorns Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011  Student Writer
Oh gosh
Your signature
It is so true
I've never read something so honest
It's like my life in one sentence
Wow
XD
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:iconroygbiv-mlp:
RoyGBiv-MLP Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2011
I get that a lot. :D
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:icondeathshadow1991:
deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
a quick fix, for all the crap that has been going on I'm glad that that's all that's wrong, I'll have that fixed soon
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sellyme Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2011
And if you're going to fix that, "Nopony" would be better than "No pony" in the tenth panel.
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