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Etiquette and Redemption IVby ~deathshadow1991

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Cartoons / Drawings

After getting through this one i don't think the last two pages are going to be a problem, after page extensions, file corruptions and having to walk through rain to submit this I feel that I have achieved something with this page XD. Anyway, 4 out of 6 done and still keeping up with the update every other day, wish me luck and see you all again on wensday.

Edit: switched Lyra's text so everyone can read it

Page 1: [link]
Page 2: [link]
Page 3: [link]
Page 4: *zelda "get" music*
Page 5: [link]
Page 6: [link]

~TheUnrealChrichan Jan 1, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

You should really draw the pony who is currently speaking with their mouth open. Now it looks like they're using telepathy...

~deathshadow1991 Jan 1, 2012

well a combination of time constraints and other stuff led to a few problems, plus this being my first comic with actual dialogue the poses where more for the emotion and I was trying to make them quickly. I will keep your advice in mind in the future though.

~vsbloom Dec 26, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

panel 9: "person" dont u mean pony?

~nintenstar Dec 26, 2011

Loving this! Don't stop!

~deathshadow1991 Dec 26, 2011

don't plan to, not till i win that tablet from equestria daily ^^

~RoyGBiv-MLP Dec 26, 2011

It's "too" not "to" in the final two panels, FYI. Other than that, looking good!

~deathbyrobotunicorns Dec 27, 2011 Student Writer

Oh gosh
Your signature
It is so true
I've never read something so honest
It's like my life in one sentence
Wow
XD

~RoyGBiv-MLP Dec 27, 2011

I get that a lot.

~deathshadow1991 Dec 26, 2011

a quick fix, for all the crap that has been going on I'm glad that that's all that's wrong, I'll have that fixed soon

~sellyme Dec 26, 2011

And if you're going to fix that, "Nopony" would be better than "No pony" in the tenth panel.

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