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Etiquette and Redemption III by deathshadow1991 Etiquette and Redemption III by deathshadow1991
My little SAI, Pose recycling is magic XD, another page another day, lets keep this up and keep on our way to the end.

Edit: switched where with were and fixed the guarden party line, glad no one caught that

Edit 2: Switched lyra's text so people can read it

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:iconwolfking164:
Lyra made this panel 20% cooler
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:icondeathshadow1991:
I had fun with Lyra here, didn't want to make her be mean towards Octavia
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:iconwolfking164:
Well, how can Lyra ever be mean in the first place?
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:icondeathshadow1991:
her and octavia where rivals but turned friendly towards eachother, it was more of a taunting that they did to eachother than actual meanness in the first place though.
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:iconwolfking164:
Lyra and Octavia? Ugh. Hasbro, y u have so many background ponies?
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:icondeathshadow1991:
to simulate an actually populated world, i blame the fandom for giving them personalities
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:iconwolfking164:
Eh. Sometimes, it works out. Other times, it doesn't. There's just some ponies that just wouldn't work.
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:iconnova225:
Lyra, Lyra Heartstrings... indeed. Mmh ?
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:icondeviatealittle:
Its a good comic, for sure, but you do need to go back and fix the punctuation, especially in the first panel. You have commas where there should be periods to end thoughts, and question marks are omitted or commas are missing. Needs a good edit of the text. It gets the point across, but sloppily. Had to be said.

Otherwise? I enjoy it so far. Onwards!
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:icondeathshadow1991:
Well it was a rough project and at this point I'm going to move forward to my next one and have pre-readers on it this time so mistakes like this don't happen again.
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