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Etiquette and Redemption II by deathshadow1991 Etiquette and Redemption II by deathshadow1991
Another in only 2 days, If I keep up this pace then I'll make it through this yet 2/7, lets keep it rockin on.

Anyway, got to be a bit lazy with this one, copied some of my own work but who's complaining. I know the quality isn't the best, plan on coming back to this once the competition is over but either way.

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Omny87 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
When you do come back to it, I'd check your punctuation, because there's a few missing periods and commas here and there. Also, I think in the third panel you meant to say "Are you sure you don't want me to come, Octy?" or "Are you sure you don't want me to come with you, Octy?" Because right now it's missing a "you" in there.
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ErgoCogito Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
That's just the way some people say it. They drop the "you" after "with." e.g.-"Can I come with?"
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Omny87 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Oh, I see. Without a comma or anything, it just looked like there was a word missing.
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WOLLFFEEY Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
"Octy"? I think someone here might be a fan of The Vinyl Scratch Tapes... X3
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deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
I am a fan of K-colt and the Vinyl Scratch Tapes but this was actually inspired by the fanfic Allegrezza which uses the same nickname.
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WOLLFFEEY Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
Well, I got that once I got to the part with Octavia looking for a bar. XD

And I'm glad you're a fan of both. Tell me, have you listened to the audio productions of The Vinyl Scratch Tapes? X3;;
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deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2012
yeah but I must say I was not to impressed by the preformance, I mean it was good but it felt like it was lacking the energy and timing at places to be honest.
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WOLLFFEEY Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
Well the timing was entirely my fault. Our sound editor is still a novice and is learning as he goes, so my dialogue's timing with HannahK's wasn't exactly how we had recorded it (we record it together over Skype, you see). But I'm sorry you felt that I lacked energy. I play her as restrained and somewhat anal-retentive, so my holding back on being too excitable, especially next to Hannah's Vinyl, I suppose can be interpreted as lacking energy. Oh well. I suppose I can't please everyone. :/
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deathshadow1991 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
I never said it was bad, just unpolished. Also during that time me and a friend of mine where planning on recording The Vinyl Scratch tapes so we had our own vision of how things where going to be like. Maybe in the future you guys could get together and try again
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WOLLFFEEY Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2012
Well, once we finish episode 4 we are considering remastering episode 1. However, did you happen to know that we have only gotten better? Episode 2 is miles above the quality of episode 1. And the one judge whose opinion I most highly regard, Corey W. Williams, the author, absolutely loves our performances. So, even though you might have done it differently, our performances are precisely as the author intended. Not only that, but Coffee Grunt, the author of Allegrezza, your favorite, wants us to do an audio production of *his* story. So, we aren't going to change anything up all that much (especially considering the number of views and the very high percentage of thumbs up on youtube... well, you get the idea).
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